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Sapphire Skies a Memory ( HM )

Aqua clarity crystal so clear,
Barely a ripple,
Tranquil..
at peace.

We walk in paths of our an-sectors,
Two young to realize,
What future our tracks,
Would take us.

No care in the world,
Only for each other,
Eyes that reflect our pools,
Pools of love and emotions.

The home we were to build,
From the food of given nature,
Unfurnished elegance,
Only a bed to rest our weary heads.

Our days moon dance a shimmering night,
Starlight glistens,
Diamonds encrusted jewels,
Sapphire within a golden ring.

Ever binding,
Love,
Our unity,
Til the dream of life, fades.

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  • I.c.
    July 17, 2008

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    rich

    Very nice words indeed, almost had a soothing quality to me. Very well done


  • aboomer silver member
    July 7, 2008

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    Softly romantic. I especially like,
    'Aqua clarity crystal so clear,
    Barely a ripple,
    Tranquil..
    at peace.'
    and
    'Our days moon dance a shimmering night,
    Starlight glistens,
    Diamonds encrusted jewels,
    Sapphire within a golden ring.'
    Lovely.
    best wishes in your contest.


  • onesugar gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    Soft and gentle, beautiful imagery.
    Loved the ending to this
    Good luck in the contest thank you for entering
    ~sugar~


  • daviscth silver member
    July 6, 2008

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    Another wonderful response from the prompt sis. The imagery is so awesome in this. I hope you placed in the contest.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 6, 2008

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    Ah..the beauty of love and the immagery itself is the shining in the verse..well done my friend....thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...


  • Candy6
    July 6, 2008
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    This is okay poem.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 6, 2008

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    Such a beautiful poem this. Your imagery, again, was outstanding and carried me away. This was gentle and soft and so creative in the writing of it. The background too, is stunnning. Well done Julie. Good luck in the contest.

    Dark Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • Angelflower
    July 6, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job hun.. I really like the image that you created here.. It was soft and sweet.. I wish you the best of luck..


    Angel


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    July 6, 2008

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    sounds romanic..... hehe..... great write..... i love your work..... thanks for sharing this... good luck... hugs

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