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baked.

vacant stare
and matted hair.

bare feet,
new-age hippies.

with blood-shot eyes,
it's no surprise
that he's high as a kite.

peace signs
and hackey-sacks.


bmw vans,
new age hippies.

with blood-shot eyes
it's no surprise
that's he's high as a kite.

and your friendship bracelets
and your dreadlocks
and your friendship bracelets
and your tye-dye shirts

it's no surprise
it's no surprise

with blood-shot eyes
it's no suprise
that he's high as a kite.

he's high as a kite
he's high as a kite

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Comments

  • lillypoet
    July 17
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    good

    it needs a litteel work u repet line 7 2 much.
  • evelynxxoo
    July 10

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    you go girl tell them how it is i could just see all the hippies now lighting up with there red eyes you havethere cards marked the picture in my mind of them all is quite funny


  • Warrior7 Greeters member
    July 7

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hi emmytayfwine

    I must say that this poem made me giggle i really enjoyed it. Good stuff. Keep writing

    Andy
    Site Greeter