Warmth of memories, my only solace,
embers of his love lay heavy upon my mind,
hope...
burning against my heart,
flickering
like a candle in the wind.
Dusk settles me into oblivion,
and yet, I wish upon that star,
reminded of the twinkle in his eyes
where I saw love,
that touched me whole.
Author notes
'Candlelit Thoughts' by Mark Braithwaite.
A contest entry
- Thoughts by Sue Cardwell.
1750 points, ended July 20, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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yes
I can identify -
Very pretty, just sparse and stark enough to be a wonderful take on the picture.
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This is so beautifully deep and heart felt My eyes are tearing
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Aww what a lovely comment. Thank you so much, but I didn't mean to make you weep.
I truly appreciate your kindness.
Linda
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Thank you for your entry in my contest. You have taken the picture prompt and written a very deep and beautiful poem.
Good luck in the contest...Sue
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Beautiful!
This is an amazing poem you have written for the beautiful picture prompt. It has a soothing tone to it, and it brings the reader right in. A very touching write. Blessings, Patty
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Thank you for your touching comment. I'm glad you liked it.
Linda
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The shower of sentiments are here wetting the life and touching the truth..well done my friend....thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...
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Thank you for such a lovely comment, I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
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Sis,
Would you get out of my mind already? This is sooooo me and someone... my thoughts, my feelings, my love, my wishes, my dreams...
OMG!!! How do you do it?
Great job on this one!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Sorryyyy
I couldn't help it, are you sending me vibes or something lol Glad you liked it sis, means alot to me.
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Very deep
And thought provoking indeed! A very tranquil read that I need right now thank you. I did enjoy reading this one alot, thank you for sharing.
I am sorry for n reading more but summer is here and my Isa is with me.
~Ron~
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Thank you for your nice comment, I'm glad you enjoyed the read. I hope you are ok. And please don't apologize, I know how hectic life can be sometimes. Take care and thanks again!
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Very touching.
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Aww thank you Mark, very much appreciated.
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