Candy Clouded Pain

Time held

cup of youth

Coloured sky's

endless days

Medicines of laughter

rippled pools of joy

Challenging flight

with fantasy

Kingdoms

with sticks

Rainbows for

climbing

Moving holes

for gold

In the silence

of the never

time

Before lines

were drawn

And the battle

for being

....raged

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art by;el1as(devintart.com) "in the dark" Poem by tainfinite

Contest for Today's Poem Members ONLY!!!!! by Todays Poem Box. 1700 points, ended July 22, 2008, 16 entries
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PerfectImperfection
July 21, 2008

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Revelry; the bittered edge of reasoning, looking back upon the dawn of days gone by. A well spoken piece to go along with the image - a more somber delve - and lovely.

"Time held
cup of youth

Coloured sky's
endless days"

.. great beginning ..

This piece led a wishful breath of looking back, as innocence reigned. Nicely done. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
Entwining Beauty
July 11, 2008

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simply beautiful like a time line of adventure and beauty good luck
Poetic Tasha
July 9, 2008
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please include your name in the Author notes as per instructions.
Denierim
July 8, 2008

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I adore the imagery you filled this piece with and the subject turning to a battle in the end really added up to the depth. I really like this; these few words really tell a lot.
devils angel
July 7, 2008
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ey like the work here... come through to me easily
motel
July 7, 2008
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imagery and the tone of the poem is great ... love the shift at the end of the work. thanks.