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Entrapment

Missing image
Borne of oceans,
tears for the lovelorn;

Yearning for freedom
long-since stolen,

stripped of my essence
and forced to inhabit
a shell I barely recognize.

Unable to escape
the stranglehold
of your gentle hands,

smothered by confines
of mortality.

 

Author notes

One might say it's personal...

I did a bit of research as well:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Selkie

Pic-credit: "A Selkie's Lament" by sil-enigma at deviant art.

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  • this is amazing huni, i really do love this,
    its so amazing, your imagery and all,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx
  • you have such emotionwithin your words and they speak with such a strong and dark description in them. its an amazing piece well done hun
  • stripped of my essence
    and forced to inhabit
    a shell I barely recognize.


    This part seems so personal........great job with this, I loved the darkness that surrounded the whole write

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**

  • Lovely, lovely, lovely!

    I was so excited to see you post a new poem!
    I just loving reading your poetry....you are the Master
    of Air. and Illusion...your verses pull us into the
    poem..and we never know where you will take us....it's
    like a dark scary walk through a forest of discovery!
    great poem....smothered by confines of mortality!
    ears/Seattle way to write!

  • Oh wow! Excellent take on the image - yes, now I kick myself in the but for not waiting a lil longer lol. Great imagery and sullen flow. Great write!!!

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