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I looked for the moon...

I looked for the moon last night
the new moon              I
couldn’t find it          the moon had gone
all wrong in the sky
that’s wrong
I looked in the wrong place

the moon was just fine
              cruising on
              on course
just right for the time of year
how come I didn’t look right
              turn right to the moon
              know where to find it?

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  • kamulneix
    July 7
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    VERY GOOD

    hOW i FELL AT THIS TIME. lOOKING BUT NOT SEEING.

  • LionessK Greeters member
    July 6

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    welcome to allpoetry

    Thought-provoking...and very well written out. I liked the flow of your thoughts here and enjoyed reading each line. Thank youf ro sharing your words and talent.
    Keep writing on.


    ~Kristy