When I'm holding you
my world stands still
I can't help but do
all that you will.
Time is so kind
each time you stand by me
I could never leave you behind
and hopefully this love you can see.
I can't help myself but fall
more and more in love each day
When I'm with you I have it all
your love lights the way.
My heart always skips a beat
whenever you are near
I know that the past won't repeat
each time that you and I are here.
each time that we kiss
I lose all control
with you I know
Your love makes me whole.
Please don't critique this.
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aww
with you I know
your love makes me whole
those lines took me away
thanks for sharing!
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wow i totally can relate to this... ur awesome
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Very beautiful Joel your peotry speaks from your heart great write.
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aww
this was so beautiful. i loved it, and whoever your inspiration for your wrods is is the luckiest gal ever..keep it up -
Awe!
I don't know what else to say! This is so beautiful!!! Things haven't been going well for me in the love department and this made me cry Great work of art you have penned here!!!!
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OMG this is a wonderful poem!! it's so sweet and laced w/emotion. wonderful write!
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A sketch of love with so much honesty and truth as well...well done my friend....thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...
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Very sweet and loving Joel!
It's always great to have someone
in your life that makes you feel like
this all of the time. Well done bro!
Jeremy0826 -
Sweetly romantic which is always welcome in my book though at the moment my muse fluctuates between humor and dark!
Thanks for sharing once again!
xxx Hilly
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