My darling let us sit here
At the end of our dock for a while
Let us watch the sun go down
It will bring us joy with a smile
I love to see the Sun's rays
As they dance upon the water
The tide rolls in, the tide rolls out
And the shadows are chased by an otter
Oh how beautiful it is
To see the Sun go down
Billowy clouds and water blue
And Sun rays dance around
I think I could sit here all night
Until the dawn breaks through
For all the beauty captured here
Fills my heart with more love for you
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This left a beautiful image of two so in love
never wanting it to end. The ending saying it all.
Thank you for entering and good luck
~sugar~
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Ah..you are real poet and your love is the true sentiment of the heart...well done my friend....thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...
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Thank you so very much PrabhuDayal. Your comments are greatly appreciated...Katie
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BEST OF LUCK
Billowy clouds and water blue
And Sun rays dance around
katie! very nice verse carefully worded.enchanted me a lot.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest -
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Hi There Purush
Nice to hear from you. Thank you for your comment on my poem So glad you enjoyed reading it. Katie
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Great poem. I've said before how much I love watching sunsets but it makes it even better when you have the person you love with you there to share its beauty with you.
I think I could sit here all night
Until the dawn breaks through
For all the beauty captured here
Fills my heart with more love for you.
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