"During flight
keep eyes ahead,
to surely miss
the spiders web.
Even if you
forget that,
ALWAYS avoid
a yawning..."
Author notes
It's late, I am tired, so if this does not work, please just mercifully remove it. Just loved the prompt.
A contest entry
- PIF-Pic Prompt-Quickie-Reserve 10 poets x 20 words by Cannonsfire.
525 points, ended July 6, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great write, short and sweet, i like it. Congrads on winning gold! you realy deserved it, you are very tallented, again, nice write, keep the pen flowing
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this fits perfectly in with the picture... amazing job! very cute and fun to read
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Lovely! So typical of Tink!
Great write. Thanks for sharing.
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awh this is SO cute! its very sing-song like and happy! it put a smile on my face. congrats on the gold! great work!
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Haha, great piece. Amazing job with just 20 words, I can't do much of anything with just 20 words, and you penned a brilliant hilarious piece. Congrats on the gold trophy, it was well deserved. Reading the author notes I'm going to have to go check what you can do when you are not so tired.
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This is cute.
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Love it. Congrats on the Gold, well deserved. Perhaps your muse likes auto pilot. This one was fun. Keep it up.
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Lol this is wonderful and so deserving of the gold Congratulations and maybe you should write more when you are tired hehe
Gaylene
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Thank you, I wrote this after advising myself to go to bed for the tenth time
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hahaha...the view from Tinkerbell, very clever! Love, C
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This is cute I hope that tinkerbell is a spider and not a freaking hamster or mouse lol Thanks for sharing goodluck in the contest.
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