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A Tranquil Tune For The Sun

 

 

 

 

Lightning fills the charcoal sky

as she slowly makes her way

into unfamiliar territory

 

she places her violin

against her delicate neck

and plays a tranquil tune

 

hoping for daylight

to reclaim its place amongst

the terror in the sky

 

she plays for the sun

every lurking star behind

the ominous clouds

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

30-60 Words
Prompt: Picture
"A Selkie's Lament" by: sil-enigma (deviant art)

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  • Texas Tornado
    July 6

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    ohhhhh I love the visuals! This was captivating and alluring in content for me congratulations on the HM


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    July 6

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    Inded a beautiful immagery revealing her actions of the heart...well done my friend....thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...

  • PerfectImperfection
    July 6
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    ...


  • Sandra R Reynolds silver member
    July 6
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    Very good discription and goes well with prompt


  • PerfectImperfection
    July 6
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    A lovely take on the image here. Nice use of imagery to define. Thanks so much for your entry!
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