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Risks and redemption

In the doorway of my dreams I wait,
Sitting at the the tempting gate.

I could travel through that door,
And maybe have my dreams and more.

Or I could play it safe and smart,
Entering, I'd have to risk my heart.

Such a bewitching puzzle I've found,
Do I try to fly or stay my ground?

I'll come to my decision someday,
But for now, at the gate I'll stay.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    July 6

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    Yes..this is one of the state of the heart..one ca relate with it...well done my friend....thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...