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WHEN I BE KICKING IT TO A BROTHER
A BROTHER LIKE NO OTHER
I GOT THAT MAN OPEN LIKE I'M HIS BABIES MOTHER
OOH YEAH I GOT HIM OPEN
LIKE THE DOOR TO A CAR
I GOT HIM AJAR AND I CAN DRIVE HIM ALL THE WAY
BECAUSE I'LL TAKE IT THAT FAR
OPEN
YOU HEAR WHAT I'M TELLING YOU
BECAUSE I'M ONLY SCHOOLING YOU
BE A REAL WOMAN AND YOU TOO SURELY CAN DO
OPEN HIM UP...OPEN HIM UP
NOW BROTHER TO STUCK...OPEN
STEADY WISHING AND HOPING
HE'S THE ONE THAT I'VE CHOSEN
TO BE MY EQUITABLE ONE
WHEN ALL IS SAID AND DONE
I'VE OPENED HIM UP
I'VE TURNED HIS KEY
NOW THE BROTHER IS STUCK OPEN
WAITING ON ME
OPEN ETERNALLY!
FROM INFANT TO INFINITY!
OPEN...OPEN...OPEN

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  • ennovy silver member
    July 7, 2008

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    You have done an heck of a piece here, I see so many women in these shoes. Another wonderful spoken word read.....excellent concept....novy


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 6, 2008

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    Indeed I like the intensity of the thought structure..just a amaazing verwe you brought...well done my friend....thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...