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Angels cage

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Creations sing
vicious melodies
while playing with
the heart strings
of the lonely..

Waves of sinners
beliefs and angels glory
crash on my souls fragile
cage..

Author notes

30 - 60 words
"A Selkie's Lament" by: sil-enigma (deviant art)

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  • Another so sad write.. how our heart can be played and betrayed...

    This is written so wonderfully!


  • maralisa silver member
    July 7

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    Creations sing vicious melodies beliefs and angels glory crash on my souls fragile cage.. wow this is so deep full of sincere emotions of sadness brillant congratulations on your well deserved honor

  • beautiful once again
    i love you
  • Well done! well done!

    Magnificent dark write....bold pearls of wisdom in it
    too!
    love that creations sings viscious melodies...what a way
    to capture us right from the start...
    excellent imagery....way to write on the prompt!
    ears/Seattle


  • markgrif gold member
    July 6
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    Awesome work sis.

  • ...

  • A very nice take on the image prompt. Dark embrace of thought and detail. Thanks so much for the entry!
  • this is a very beautiful poem,
    you should do good in the contest,
    all my love,
    kitty xx

  • markgrif gold member
    July 6
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    *HUG*
  • You just can't stop greatness can you.
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