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~The Soul Bleeds~

Missing image

Stars burnt out, no longer do they shine.

Moon no longer casts its beauty upon the heart.

No bird songs does the soul hear.

Only sadness is felt, as darkness enters

on a cloak of solitude, bringing gifts

of broken dreams and promices.

Leaving the soul to bleed upon the sand,

a love lost and mourned.

~*~

With no love,

we are as driftwood, carried by the tide,

and thrown upon the shore,

rejected and alone.

~*~ ~*~

 

© 2008 Angel's Whispers (All rights reserved)

 

 

 

Hello Dear Poet,

Thanking you in advance for reading my words and also for any comments left.

I appreciate your thoughts dearly and hope that you have enjoyed the read.

Take care and many beautiful blessings of love and happiness.

 

Your friendly AP Angel,

~Angel-anne~

 

Author notes

I HAVE CHOSE OPTION NUMBER 2. "I love you, I hate you, Cupid is an Indian Giver"

Credit goes to 'The madman' for this border. Thank you dear friend!

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Comments

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  • penman gold member
    July 7
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


    • Angels Whispers gold member
      July 8
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      penman


      Hello Penman,
      Thanks so much for the comment,applause and the H.M award.I am pleased that you liked my write and it was an honor writting for you.
      Blesings to you and your loved ones.
      ~Angel~

  • ckwriter69 silver member
    July 7

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    Very heartfelt emotions stressed in this write. The sadness brought forward bring out the feelings in the pic. Nicely formed and written. Good luck in the contest.


    • Angels Whispers gold member
      July 8
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      ckwriter69

      Hi Babes thanks sweet heart for the read and applause, your thoughts on my work are highly valued and deeply cherished.Blessing of love ,happiness and health I send to you and your loved ones.
      Take care Charley love ya!
      ~Angel~

  • paw-writer silver member
    July 6

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    This is a beautiful take on the prompt and the picture is amazingly beautiful as well. The last stanza is especially powerful, and it drives the message of the poem home. Nice write! Blessings, Patty


    • Angels Whispers gold member
      July 6
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      pathwee


      Hi Patty, hugs to you sweet soul.I hope all is well with you and that this message greets you with a happy heart.Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my work.I value your thoughts dearly and appreciate your time and review.You have a beautiful soul and I wish you much happiness and love.
      Take care.
      ~Angel~
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