i will always love u.
no matter wat happens.
through thick and thin,
through darkness and light.
i know you're not with me,
but i will try to wait for u.
except if u make me wait to long,
i will probably be gone.
just remember im not a book
i will not stay waiting
for u forever.
could u please really give me wat u think about it?
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nice
that was a very nice piece that i really thought was inspirational -
Great this is a very good poem i enjoyed it alot.
Good job -
Ah..this is the heart speaking through the touching poetic words...well done my friend....thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
I think you have said exactly what you feel. You made it clear that you love someone enough to wait it out for them, but not enough to wait forever. And seeing as you asked what we really think, I think this would look much nicer if you capitalized your I's and used the word you instead of u. Just my personal opinion. You did well though.
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Keep expressing through writing.
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it's AWSOME PUBLISH PUBLISH PUBLISH
you seriously should PUBLISH this
it's awsome
sorry my way of saying it's off the chain awsome
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