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Natural Concessions

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Admission granted to sighed threshold,
while eager entryway opens,
and ambitious hands find soft front door;
with promised passion as foretold.
(No longer just words anymore.)

Again, again moon reopens
to receive sensual sun's tempest,
as affirmed answer to the ache.

Again, again love is confessed
in those subtle starlight whispers,
to which the whole of night defers.
 
 
 
 
 

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http://girltripped.deviantart.com/art/Rising-Thunder-41953523

"Love is friendship set on fire."
~Jeremy Irons

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  • beautiful poem. very honored to be in this contest with you.

  • woah this is a amazing take on the picture and is sensual but grasping. you have used strong and effectiveords and description bro. well done
  • you horny or what??????
    lovely take on the picture my friend

  • such wonders displayed within the bountiful hues of your words meshed with the bueyt of the setting sun and celestial eve and the passionate spirit of love and friendship eternal. many blessings always xxxx


  • Such beautiful language and emotion with romance and sensuality flowing tastefully...

    I love this...

    Lynda

  • As always you have done a beautiful job with this I am impressed by the beauty of your words that flow from your heart and mind goodluck in the contest love you

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