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Boy/Girl

B: I don't get why we can't be friends.
G: I never got why it had to end.
B: I'm over it all, no more love left.
G: I'm broken hearted, deep hole in my chest.
B: I said to you.
G: You screamed at me.
B: Get over it, girl!
G: Just please love me.
B: We're over now. Love you? What for?
G: I'm not finished, I still need more.
B: You talk in me in circles, tryna keep me with you.
G: The "us" has ended, this can't be true.
B: I loved you once, but never again.
G: If you loved me once, you can do it again.
B: Stop this game, this pointless fight.
G: I can't stop it now..no not tonight.
B: I can't stand stupid conversations like this.
G: But, If  we stop, you'll leave, and you I'll miss.
B: I'm still gonna go, because of all this crap.
G: Stay? Leave? I can't deal with that.
B: Deal with it, girl. I'm turning, I'm gone.
G: Taking with you, my heart, a conquest you've won.

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  • This is Excellent. I like the way you have woven a conversation into this work, it also tells a good story of loves pain and troubled heart. best wishes brian.


  • Strify
    July 6
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    That was beautiful! The rhyming was really good!