I am cursed.
I am blessed.
I can see, what others can't.
I will know, just by standing near.
I can know what others can't hear.
No words need spoken,
Nore body movment at all.
No lips are moving,
Just a mind a sprawl.
My eyes are tuned,
but unneeded,
for it is your Aura & body tempature,
that are being read.
Around me,
your thoughts & emotions are open,
Just for me to see.
I can open you like a book.
Simple & easy to read.
Invader of emotions,
but also a best friend.
I'll try not to Invaed,
And lose another person,
Just from uncontroled
openness on my behalf.
Standing near you,
This is what I think.
I am curesd.
I am blessed.
Author notes
This poem is about me,
I really do this.
& have lost good friends because I made them uncomforitable around me.
I feel cursed & blessed.
A contest entry
- EXISTENTIALISM and AURAS by Mila7.
565 points, ended July 13, 9 entries
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Comments
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Aw, this poem is so sad yet powerful and proud! You've done well in capturing yourself in words.
Best of luck in the contest -
Nice work. I make people uncomfortable because I get to know who they are so easily and without even trying. I became very silent four years ago. I hardly said a word to anyone, I just observed. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a very good poem! I like the flow of ideas and the regret expressed by the character.
"Invader of emotions,
but also a best friend."
I think this is the worse part of being able to see beyond and being a friend. Its the regret of seeing but at the same time the invasion of their privacy.
I understand what you are saying. My suggestion is to not tell any kind of friends. Just those that would accept you for who you are and are open minded. in any case those who truly love you are to trust.
You'll know who when you look at them. -
coolness
good work
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