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Trees and their seeds and their leaves.

Seeds fall to the ground.
Red, gold leaves fall to the ground.
Spirng, the green returns.

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 7, 2008
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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    Seeds fall to the ground.
    Red, gold leaves fall to the ground.
    Spirng, the green returns.

    Beautiful reference to the spring's greenery after the falls are over.
    I think you mean 'spring' and not 'spirng'.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas