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Distant Lover

The thunder sounds in the sky
And has a love affair with the cloud.

Fires rage in my soul,
Planning to spread each passion within.

The colors swirl among their lovers
Which are the breezes among my face.

It reminds me of soft kisses you gave me
Up my arms and then to my lips.

With nature's working
It's all in balance
Like our understanding and acceptance toward each other.
My love for you is true like a reflection,
Even with distorted ripples.

Look within and you will see
The underlying figure.

That is why when we're apart
I feel like I could burn to ashes.

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  • Passionate write...Very powerful..
    TY for entering!

    Lynda