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Aztarein: 5-23 From Pillar to post haiuk

From Pillar to post.
Life and Death, baby, adult.
The cycle of life.

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Aztarein: 5-23 From Pillar to post haiuk

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  • Broken-Bones
    August 19, 2008

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    I liked this, I felt it was a simple and yet clever taken on the prompt. I loved the way you choose to fit it with this form and felt you did it really well, leaving a last line that was a pwerful ending. Great Work x


  • aztarein
    July 8, 2008
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    But I did! opton 5, number 23