I call upon my master
In darkness she doth dwell
Comfortably she comes to me
My life a living hell
Suffer me sweet torment
Infuse your delicious pain
Her laughter clicks and clacks as if upon the tracks
Of a nightmare bound train
Dark images wretch and shriek
Within my idle mind
In sorrows reach,I will not breach
Sweet anguish so refined
The fire nearly extinguished in my mortal eye
Burns bright once again
In oceans lewd,I now bathe nude
Awash the saturating sin
I fall to her feet with a sigh staring in majestic awe
So envious am I of she,so many have want to be
Her for which they call
Pray tell me my Queen
Why I so humble am so deservant
Projecting her final thought,she bids me ask naught
But remain always her servant
In sleepless slumber I find my peace
All things foul for which I have craved
And I say to thee again...All ye without sin...
Shalt ever know what it is to be saved
Author notes
For Lady Dementia
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This was a delicious poem, with some really good rhymes in it. Nice and dark, and menacing, but with a good poetic flair.
Genious, in this line: In oceans lewd,I now bathe nude
some great stuff in here. I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for entering. -
Pray tell me my Queen
Why I so humble am so deservant
Projecting her final thought,she bids me ask naught
But remain always her servant
this is what
a Queen and servant
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Hahaha, well written, though the meter's a little shak-e in a few lines (I had to reread them to make it work)
Right about the end, I was tapping my foot going mmhmm, mmhmm, so what? then those last two lines ring and give the rest of the poem a meaning. -
Dark deep and you held me with this wonderful poem
Thank you for your entry and for those amazing words.
Best wishes
Julie
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Her laughter clicks and clacks as if upon the tracks
Of a nightmare bound train Dark images wretch and shriekIn sleepless slumber I find my peace All things foul for which I have craved wonderful poem full of strong emotions from the darkness good luck in the contest
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wow what a cool piece of poetry to write for my dark reflection..she is awesome..and so is this
Good luck
Cindy
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Wow this is awesome Glad I inspire you, not all are enthralled by the darkness as we. I love how you've penned this, got me down to a T 
Must add this to my hall of fame, with your consent of course? Stunning piece, thank you sooooo much for writing it Good luck in the contest 
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This is really good I like it love the last 2 lines!
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