Primped blade of grass, crass
grindstone-winds sliver, whisper,
whistles inaudible tones of haste.
Squeals excite, maul time's agenda
for quick slice, lethal propaganda.
Paralyzed view, hypnotic, too sane,
fanatics slew, synaptic stew ...
Pain, precision's dullness
tearing under murderer pressure,
too sure, too damn sure of yourself ...
Asleep and confident, I hope you awaken,
wake to open thoughts and equilibrium
before hate breeds another generation ...
For you have
Mida's touch ...
but are
... pyrite's bitch,
government's itch ...
Author notes
A tirade about various practices suppressing thought .. It can easily be attached to religion, specifically those fanatical(usually pressed from birth) .. but can include racism, immense hatred toward any thing/group etc .. basically anywhere thought is raped.
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I will rape your thoughts.
Bunny brilliance. You caught this is such a web that the truth spins and dwells so nicely. I great touch of devices and rhyme.
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strong feelings here ... but I have to say, hate and raped thought are not exclusive to religionists!
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Thank you for your comment ... so true, but I never said religionists were exclusive, merely easily attached ... moreso fanatics. Governments are a great one for raping thought .. extremist groups, clans .. and on and on ...
Much Love and Light ..
Steve
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well this was really intense.. lol.. you did a wonderful job in expressing your thoughts on this.. Got your point across very well me thinks..
I liked it.. very out-spoken and brutally truthful.. just the way I like it.. Lol.. well done..
Angel
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I see the AN, but also feel a personal vibe about this piece. Very powerful lines to provoke the mind, even stroke the little spikes formed around fury;s neck. Nicely penned! I love your abstractness lol!
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