Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

almost Crushed

Lightning strikes the tree.
Its Falling toward the house!
Tree misses, we live.

Author notes

This is a Haiku of when a tree almost hit our house in a thunder storm when I was little.

A contest entry

is it good?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    July 14, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Ah short and sweet, to the point. Nice use of the Haiku!