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Walkway

A walkway,
Covered in light,
Leading me to the end,
Of the road.
To where I want to,
Be.
Away from pain,
Away from hate.
My one happiness.
A place full of,
Love and care.
Full of people,
Who want to,
Help.
A beautiful place,
Full of beautiful people.
Maybe God,
Will bring me in.
Take care of me,
Maybe...

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My own take on the picture, the picture comes from somewhere, where I dunno. It's not mine haha I hope you enjoy.

A contest entry

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  • penman gold member
    July 7, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. A great expression for the picture. Best of luck in the contest.


  • onesugar gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    This is just beautiful. Although everything hangs on a maybe I do feel there is hope too. One day I am sure you will find the love, care and happiness you seek from people who really do want to help.
    This was a pleasure
    ~sugar~


  • Ally
    July 6, 2008

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    this suits the picture really well!
    How everything hangs on a maybe, never knowing where its leading.
    You write similarly to my style of writing x