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EEK! It's the broken heart.. Lol.

Waking up one moring all y eyed
and ing from the that I saw
in your eyes..

It was like had
up my heart and
And my days just flew right on by..

But then came the big bad
of broken s and I
our away!

With the ing
I walked down the street
and had myself a ..


ing your name with a drunken
I remember all the times we played..
Spin the bottle with just the two of us and
the sweet es you gave..

With the playing in the back ground
I order me some though with thoughts of you
my hunger is now ereased..

With the now gone and my
Settling I look back at what happened and feel like
..
But sounds good at the moment
and home is where I need to be..
As I stand and walk to the door I
feel a little and ..
I fall to the ground and on the way done
I hit my head on the
thinking that everyone will now think that I'm ..

I run to the (to call my mom)
when I pick my sorry butt up off the ground
knowing that I am soo and red,
because the guy in the corner
is ing..
I get all and start to walk up to him ready for a
but then the ness gets to me and I run headlong into the bathroom..

With mom outside waiting and the guy still ing
I hide my head in knowing that tomorrow because of you..
I will have the biggest hangover ever!

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  • crimsondew silver member
    July 17
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    This is a good emoticon poem...
    All the best!


  • J. M. Spenser
    July 10

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    well I could comment on this but I have already...but just once more...Good Job.

    • Angelflower Greeters member
      July 10

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      Lol.. glad you liked it? Doesn't make sense to me..lol. nut meh..
  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 10

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    ha rotflmao who cares if it makes no sense it made me smile


  • maralisa silver member
    July 10
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    brillant poem love it good luck in the contest

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 10
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    STILL WAITING

    • Angelflower Greeters member
      July 10
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      Lol.. I'm trying!!!! I may pull out of the contest. can't think of anything..lol

  • J. M. Spenser
    July 6
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    Wow...So much deep emotion in this. I love it. Unbelievable. The best yet. XD lol

    • Angelflower Greeters member
      July 10
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      Done! you should so give this a try!!! it makes no sense but I had fun..Lol.
    • Wrinkling Mind silver member
      July 6

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      hahahaha! I was coming in here to do the same thing! meh I'll proceed with my plan anyway (great minds think alike)

      This is absolutely amazing I loved the first line, wow wow wow

      • Angelflower Greeters member
        July 6
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        You guys are so mean to me!!! I'm going to hurt you both!! lol..jk.. great minds?! now that is funny...
        • Wrinkling Mind silver member
          July 6
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          "great minds?!"

          you better believe it!

        • J. M. Spenser
          July 6
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          What can I say Jet. It's a really amazing poem... you've really out done yourself. And it can be seen by two exceptional poets.

          • Angelflower Greeters member
            July 6
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            the shadows in your minds? Lol.. you BOTH!!! are so on something... I swear! lol.

    • Angelflower Greeters member
      July 6
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      ha ha... meanie
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