...One would welcome your prescence
Forever beside me;
always smiling never fading,
never fading.
If such power emenated from your mouth,
the world would bow to our heavenly duo.
Heating words to add to their power
as they blast through concrete walls.
And through these apertures
two would travel as one,
and the elements would wrap around us.
definitive beauty flooding our vision
while we breeze through our eternal life.
Then as the journey nears curtains
we swoop gracefully downwards and rest,
having Gaia peacefully tuck us in.
Staring up at our stars,
supertemporal bliss overpowering my mind
as we are hydrated in euphoria.
{Ever growing}
[This dream of mine]
{Raging mind}
[Losing Time]
Author notes
Prompt:'If You Could Ride The Wind, Breath The Fire, and Drink The Earth'
A contest entry
- Quote prompt.... by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 10, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh, I love this! Your sense of diction is amazing; it's almost as if you handpicked the words and phrases so carefully as to make the perfect combination! Gosh, I'm glad I read this!
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i really like it... flows beautifully and has awesome imagery!!
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i love this, i like the emotion embedded in it! great write! good luck in the contest
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this is a beautiful write...nice imagery...the ending is nice..this poem is really deep and full of feeling..nice write! much love!
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