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Burst of clarification

The abrasions chuckle when
you furnish my ego.
Inflictions echo out
fits of laughter as you
accommodate my aspirations.
Discomfort virtues die
with delight when you
capitulate my mind.
Aches and pains agonize
gales of laughter with
your acceptable advise

Author notes

1. It only hurts when you give me a reason to laugh.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 8

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    This is amazing hun
    Love the whole poem
    Sets a mind going as I read this..
    Well done on the Silver
    Julie


  • Venugopal silver member
    July 8
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    Nice poem my child, It is written very well. Authors note is admirable..Keep it up

  • penman gold member
    July 7
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • penman gold member
    July 7
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    Hi. Just a reminder to please post your poem soon. I will judge later today. Thank you.