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Switch my Sitch by Mike Noxaura

Switch my sitch,
my situation!
I need some light,
help me please?

Wait a second!
I'm in control here,
so why am i down,
on my bleeding knees?

I can do anything!
I can run, and laugh!
But i gotta decide,
not rock on my calves!

I remember "The Secret"
And what those guys said,
if i love me i can see,
that it's all in my head!

Author notes

Just a pop at my own way of looking about things.
Mike Noxaura, Switch My Sitch

A contest entry

an honest shot at reminding myself of where happiness is from, ME!

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  • Autumn Whisper
    September 2, 2008
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    A really nice poem MikeNoxaura - what an unusual name, love it - anyway, i agree with our wonderful contest host, whiterabbit--x, in that it has a lot of truth in it. Well done on this piece Mike.
    Best of luck in the contest
    best wishes as always
    Autumn Whisper


  • whiterabbit.
    July 26, 2008

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    I really love this poem. It's cute and short with a lot of truth in it. Thanks so much for entering.