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Strips

To cast a stroll

across the pier of the mind,

inhaling exotic vision's gust

in air so utterly sublime,

incense rising from a sea

of cerulean tangential wine.

 

Before the landing

washed by time's turquoise tides,

steps, hesitant and anxious,

amble towards destiny's dock,

gazing through mind's eye

at tomorrow's horizon,

hues in azure auras

glowing in tranquility's tales,

eyes search for fate's cargo ship

laden in pillow's gold.

 

Flares from yesterday's candles

form their stunning halos

upon the strip of pulse

that stretches towards both fortune or failure,

exhaling toxins from stumbled detours.

 

Heart draped in a gossamer lace of sensory scarf

woven with soothing sapphire caresses,

treasures from the euphoria's vault.

 

It is all a passport taken within,

a sojourn of blessing or curse

depending on one's attitude wind.

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  • onesugar silver member
    July 7

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    A beautiful take on the prompt. You hve painted a beautiful picture with your words. This was a pleasure to read.
    Thank you for entering and good luck
    ~sugar~


  • maralisa gold member
    July 7

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    incense rising from a sea of cerulean tangential wine.Before the landing washed by time's turquoise tides,hues in azure auras glowing in tranquility's tales,woven with soothing sapphire caressestreasures from the euphoria's vault.It is all a passport taken within,a sojourn of blessing or curse depending on one's attitude wind.you have painted a beautiful rainbow of the picture with wonderful images I realy loved these lines good luck in the contest


  • Desire gold member
    July 6

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    Oh My~

    Excellente and Magnificent take on the contest picture
    Wahoooooooooooooo

    Flares from yesterday's candles
    form their stunning halos
    These lines grabbed hard~

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweetness
    Best wishes too
    and my Love & Light~ Desire~*~


  • sunshinegirl
    July 6

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    WOW!!! What a great read this one is! I love it!! There are a few lines in this that hit home for me! Thanks! I needed that I think!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta