Walking down the board walk
waiting for a sign
Gazing out into the sea
Looking up into the clouds
Gives me an urge to fly
soaring through the sky
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A contest entry
- Pic Inspired by onesugar.
900 points, ended July 8, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This has such a flowing quality, and I really enjoyed reading it. i really liked the first line,
'Walking down the board walk
waiting for a sign'.
Good job!
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This is so simple and sweet, captures the picture perfectly. I loved the ending to this.
Thank you for entering and good luck
~sugar~
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Great for such a short poem i loved it alot.
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Beautiful, ethereal
Can see you walking,
Floating on air
Down by the board walk
Wish I was there
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