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My Life

Life in an uptight home sucks,
Creativity and its expression are shunned,
Communication of feelings and thoughts are banned,
My life is confined to my friends and what I write,
Crying and anger included,
The fact that I’m bi just adds on to the confusion,
Why can’t I just be me?
People say you should just be yourself,
Then why does no one like it when I do?
Ofcourse no one likes a depressed, anger prone Psychopath
Then who should I be?
I guess I’ll stick with what I’ve been
A FAKE.

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  • WOW

    geez very powerful words you use in here, and it's also another one I can relate to. I'm also Bi no one in my family knows and I live with my 3 brothers so it's hard, but i can't let anyone know that. I hide behind mask, but as you insinuated in this poem you don't want to hide, and i really repect you for that.

    Great job.


  • Ally
    July 6

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    You sound like you know EXACTLY who you are Other people just won't accept it.
    Stuff them!
    Personally, and well written