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Gospel Music



I slept through the night in
yesterday's clothes; so worn
I was when I'd gotten home

But now, how nice to sit out
early Sunday, before the
harsher heat of the day

Morning smokers still asleep;
only me, and one dark brown duck
standing upon neighbor's rooftop

Scratching himself with a foot;
black cat yawns as he saunters
across the parking lot

Cuban anoles brown as tree bark;
myriad shades of green
on a rich blue morning

Orange aloe blooms like
little bursts of fireworks;
grand agave

Asparagus fern sprouting, sheen of
new leaves, some eaten by insects,
a few squawking parakeets

Cooing dove atop the lamp post,
mockingbird surveying from a tree top,
yellow striped butterflies

Fluttering furiously, attracted
by bottlebrush blossoms
and my bright red T-shirt.

The call of blue jays,
and a woodpecker;
all the usual suspects.

Blue watering can filled with fresh rain;
seashell souvenirs washed, sun bleached,
some silvery underneath

A few fallen leaves tumble gently across
the asphalt; suddenly two awesome herons
glide by, so majestic yet silently

They leave me wondering if they
were an illusion, while I sit sheltered
by tender avocado leaves

Scribbling in my dollar journal,
printed with the palest pink roses,
trying to compose a poem

Befitting this sweet magnificence;
echoes of Emily Dickinson

"Some keep the Sabbath going to Church --
I keep it, staying at Home --
With a Bobolink for a Chorister --
And an Orchard, for a Dome --

A white ibis couple join the congregation;
crossing the street on spindly legs to
breakfast in the grass a mere few feet from me

Clearly, I've been indoors way too much
lately, hiding from heat and humidity;
last evening, also, was lovely

A pink and orange sunset
I saw on the way home from
a dull dinner obligation

And then a fantastic fireworks show
I had been told was relocated
but thankfully, no.


Wouldn't mind morning cup of joe,
just feel too lazy to make some
anyways, I'm feeling quite renewed!

Haven't seen a human being
yet awake from my own household
or around the neighborhood

Well, ok, I'll admit an airplane
so a few folks have woken.


Having written this rather sloppily,
I hope that I can accurately
transfer my script at the keyboard.


Author notes

I had brought a book outdoors with me to read,
The Zen Poems of Ryokan, but I forgot to open it.

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  • VeritasLiberte
    July 25, 2008
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    Very nice write about your observations of "peaceful nature" on a Sunday morn! Lovely!

  • Eusebius
    July 7, 2008
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    Bravo!!!

    This is so excellent! Very different than the styles that I prefer, however, it is wonderful, highly visual and chock full of terrific images. You must be an old hand at poetry as this moves along at nearly break-neck speed. You have conjured up a gorgeous day for use here! Bravo… bravo… bravo…


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    I CAN'T TELL YOU HOW MUCH YOUR DESCRIPTIONS MAKE ME SMILE,

    OH SO LOVELY, A SENSE OF PEACE AND BEAUTY BEYOND COMPARE,

    ALWAYS MIXED WITH YOUR BRILLIANT SENSE OF HUMOR,

    ALWAYS AMAZING

    GOD BLESS ...

     


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    You are your own poet,
    filling volumes with your
    imaginative observations!

    And what a pleasure
    to read back
    when neatly typed
    into the computer,
    a treasure of your every day,
    made spectacular in your own way!


    • Olivias Violin
      July 7, 2008

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      Thank you, my friend How are you?

      • Aesthete2000 gold member
        July 7, 2008
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        Staying up too late again!!
        Buddy coming tonight for dinner for his job takes him
        up north all week. Burning both ends and middle of
        the candle!!!!

        Take care!


  • Nienna Calmcacil
    July 6, 2008

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    Wow! The imagery was wonderful. I felt like I was actually there, with that beautiful, peaceful scene right before me. That was excellent =) And what an interesting title as well!

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