While this evening takes a dip,
In the serenity of these sinuous blues
Let my fingers read the love
Inscribed on your lips by the blushing hues
As the violet horizons melt and merge
Lets dissolve our souls into one
Slaying the voids of shuns and sins
Lets bloom as the buds in the morning sun
On this voyage called eternal love
Let me be the incessant sky
As you become this calm blue ocean
So beautiful, chaste, tranquil and shy
-Neha
July 6, 2008
Author notes
Picture inspired.
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A contest entry
- Pic Inspired by onesugar.
900 points, ended July 8, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what do you think?
Comments
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Ahhh, this deserves a gold trophy and so very touching with loving thoughts. NICE job.
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Ah..wonderful immagery and the tone is just very passionate one..well described sentiments ...thanks for sharing it...
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A beautiful take on the prompt
The ending perfect
Thank you for entering and good luck
~sugar~
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