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I'll Be Your Hero

Infinite powers within my palm
Low-key mindstate lead by a proud mind
Learning more and more about myself each day

Beginning to be the saviour of others
Even those who don't need my help

Yesterday needs help today
Only I am the one who can provide
Under any pressure and any force
Ready to brace the storm; to face death

Holding your hand the whole way though
Everlasting touch with arms wide open
Relase your pain onto my outer shell
One of these days, I'll fly you to safety

Author notes

Sometimes you are the hero...and you don't even realise it. This can apply to anyone in any situation with any person...family, friend, coworker or even yourself; a battle within. This is my favourite acrostic of mine because of the fact it will almost mean something different to each reader! I am beyond happy with the way it turned out! I hope you all enjoy this!

Good luck to everyone else in the contest, comments appreciated!

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  • peridotPixi
    July 10, 2008

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    i really like the way this acrostic turned out also the last stanza the hero part is my favorite, as you probley know im an army wife and i think that there are tons of heros out there even if they dont see themselfs a hero in their own eyes, someone else far away may think they are a hero, good luck in the contest and keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    so very true

    when you need a friend look at those around you, life can be a treasure, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Linda


  • Beauty Of Silence
    July 6, 2008

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    AWW!

    i think this is really sweet~ it was a lovely write and yea, this can aaply to anyone... a very general piece! gerat emotions stirred up while readin this amazing write! loved it as much as i love all your other writes! stunning, and keep penning...

    ooh, and your AN was so true and it just gave me this soothing feeling! thanks, love ya!

    Brilliant!

  • limechic
    July 6, 2008

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    its so true, this is a very open-ended version of a "hero"...can apply to anyone! awesomeee very well written