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Nitro

It's so quite
everythig starts to go dark
My chest is so heavy
I put my hand on my chest and feel
for my heart beat
what the f***
I pop a nitro
under my tongue
I sit still and then
I go to give an ink pen to a friend
when i give it to him I get dizzy
I sit across from him
they grab my purse get my nitro
my chest is getting heavier
they pop a nitro under my tongue
They wheel me out
Paramedics surround me and
give me another nitro
Looking up at them I smile
and ask to go back to work
they say no ma'am
Then they carry me off
to the hospital.

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  • Very interesting. This gave me an insight into an issue that I have only seen from a distance. Thank you for sharing.

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    • bluejeans51
      September 1
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      Well woodcuck is was an experience I'd like to put behind me.
  • If you had to really go through this then I am sorry because it was probably a painful and sad experience. I want to thank you for sharing this with us and also I want to say that the background you chose really goes with this at least I think so. Good job and god bless

    • bluejeans51
      September 1
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      Thank You

      Yeah I really went through it again.
      Yhank you again for it's an experience I'll never forget. Now I take deep breath and look back on it. Sorryit took so long to reply I've got a very busy life.
  • pruedence
    July 6

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    Sad this happens, it is a scary feeling! I hope all has mended as much as possible...and your hospital days are done for now...God Bless, thanks for sharing

    • bluejeans51
      September 1
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      Your welcome

      Back at work and getting ready to move out of my house to start renting again. And to start over again!!
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