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A Broken Shard

Arrows by Cupid

Beaming through the sky
Ready to pierce my chest
Opening the valves of my heart
Keen senses heighten to a new level
Enveloping my mind with thoughts
Never-ending fantasies of us

Stuck on a high, waiting for the crash
Helplessly dreaming of her
All this time as Cupid laughs at me
Readying for my own defeat
Demoralized as my soul shatters...

Author notes

A friend inspired me to enter this contest as she's a huge fan of my acrostics...this just came to me...a little bit more descriptive than the rest of mine which usually tell stories. I hope you all enjoy this read...comments please!

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    very nice Acrostic, you penned this with such a sweet way, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Linda

  • limechic
    July 6, 2008

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    whoa...ok this is really good...i didnt even realize it was an acrostic until i read the notes....wow...so descriptive, such a great write!! good luck, i think you'll do amazing =)