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Iced

Tall, tall glass
filled with crushed ice
fresh, strong,
black tea is nice
served up in a garden,
sometimes with just a hint,
of lemon or mint.

A contest entry

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  • judyjudyjudy
    July 17

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    Iced tea, such an elegant drink and it's nice to see that someone still makes it from scratch. I've never had it with mint but that would be a nice touch.

    Sit back and enjoy. Thank you for entering.
  • Lol, this is really cool. It's happy, it's short, and it's entertaining. This poem put a smile on my face, and for that I thank you.


  • Rovingone gold member
    July 6

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    How delightful. And it makes a wonderful word picture too. I love good iced tea myself. Just what I'm sipping this very moment. Yep, it and your poem just hit the spot!


  • Dreamana
    July 6
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    A refreshing read my dear, at the end of a humid day


  • maralisa gold member
    July 6
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    a perfect summer brew good luck in the contest

  • Good i liked this alot. Kinda made me want some :]
    Good job
    ..<3..
    Shelly
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