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Falling

Thunder crashing
Rain pounding
Blocks falling
crushing me inside

A path worn down
lost in time
not knowing what step to take
I stumble, i fall

Heavens wings unfold
wrapping around me tight
lifting me so gently
settling me down just right


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  • Room without doors silver member
    July 22

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    Excellent

    I thought this was well-written - it begins in darkness and uncertainty but ends on a positive note. We all need angels to help us at times. A fantastic poem.


    • Dunkler Engel
      July 22
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      Thanks

      Thanks for this , i was trying to do a dark write but i felt happy hehe.