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Left Alone

Clouds flying high
fluffy and white
before they lower
before they darken

Thunder crashed
Lightening struck
a lonesome figure
stuck in the pouring rain

waterfalls across the face
sorrow walking in pale blue eyes
clutching in fear her limp blond hair

given up in desperate attempts
a shrill voice reaching out
echoing but not far enough
falling short of help

Stuck and left alone
bruised and dying
she lays there till peace comes
and the waterfalls washes away

All That Once Was

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