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My Demise

I'm my demise, I see it in my eyes,
Every time I look in the mirror,
My fate is becoming much clearer,
I am my own destruction,
Breaking my self down,
I can only take so much in,
Before I start to drown,
Losing my breath,
The creeping of death,
Clutching it close like a cover,
Finally feel, As if something is real,
A feeling unlike any other,
I am my demise,
I love my cries,
And the tears I cause,
Seeing you cry,
Is such a high,
Don't you just love flaws,
Not much left,...Don't know what to do,...
All I can say is I'm not good enough it's true,
In my eyes you'll see my lies,
And realize my internal prize is,
My Demise.

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  • this is a very good poem,
    i love this poem, it is so real,
    with such raw emotion and heart filled,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx