In all this time I've always saught
Someone to help me see,
In all this time i never saw
That i was incomplete.
I always said, To worry not
For in time, Love would arise
I only wish i knoew back then
That love comes not to I
For within myself, i must go seek
For a purpose in which i live
Only After That Is Found
Can my true search begin...
A contest entry
- Head vs Heart (quickie, prewrites allowed) by BeachBum1.
550 points, ended October 31, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thought provoking
I thought this poem was really well constructed and the perfect length, the rhyme never felt forced,
In all this time I've always sought
Someone to help me see,
In all this time i never saw
That i was incomplete.
I loved this stanza it is perfect, the text is hard to view with the color scheme you've gone for, but that is just aesthetics really. the overall message of this poem was sweet, the speaker in the poem is self reflecting on their own experience with love, I enjoyed this aspect very much. well done thank-you for entering and good luck
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