Shall I compare thy beauty to that of a flower?
For as our love blossoms, as does your beauty.
The Rose, in all its love and care,
Can’t compare to the kindness in your eyes,
Or to the sweet melody of your soul.
The Daisy, a picture of innocence,
Can’t stand against the grace of your smile,
Or the gentle beating of your heart.
The Tulip, the essence of endurance,
Wont hold a candle to our ne’re wavering love.
Or the gentleness that is your kiss.
A flower you are not, for even the most beautiful bouquet,
Won’t compare to the beauty that is your love.
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Comments
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The imagery you used here was compelling and enhanced your use of comparison. Your poem is truly beautiful and made me happy
Well done, keep penning.
Swim~
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