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Together

To close you eyes and know you're not alone
That far away you're in another mind
On any map the distance can be shown
But you are always here for me to find

To stretch your arm and feel another there
To hold you when the World has let you down
A friend at need who takes the greatest care
Is with you in another distant town

I may not hear your voice or see your face
Or feel you when our lips meet in a kiss
You live your life in quite another place
I long ago resigned to life like this

    And yet I close my eyes and we are one
    Another walk beside you has begun

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    July 7
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    Sometimes, bro, you really nail it with a sonnet. Like now. Not bad.


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 6

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    Sigh I know how this one goes sadly...you there her here and never the twain meeting somewhere in the middle. I hate distance don't you? Love, C


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 6

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    When you read this to me I was amazed yet now reading it am in awe. Thanks honey for plaing a smile upon my face.
    Love you
    Tory


  • Gwenevere
    July 6

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    Lovely thoughts here.Friends do not have to be together to feel the love it can be sensed from a distancee, Ros