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Will they understand?

How can I explain this to my friends?
This thing that seems to have no end.
Forcing me to run on empty,
Then making me crawl

Sometimes I think there is no me at all
To many musts in my life
Things that have to be done
How can I have a believe
Look at what God did

Sometimes I don’t sleep at night
Sometimes I sleep too much
Jabber jabber rattle tattle
My mind is in such a rush

How can I tell this to my friends?
Will they think I’m nuts
All I know it’s eating my inside
And tearing out my guts

Won’t someone help me to understand?
Why I’m not a normal man
Why I’m not a normal man
Will you understand?


7/06/2008

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  • ERbby silver member
    October 7
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    How can I have a believe
    Look at what God did


    a lot of times we do seem to blam others in life for things,

    also one big personis god we blam, we say he did this he did that how could he do this and or that.

    its all a big mess. and hurtful and with the blam we put on him we lose our faith we soon stary

    no im not a big christian just to let you know in fact i am far far away frm that.

    but once in life i did go to church i did love god moe then anything but with my prob;ems in life i did blam him and i did lose all faith.

    i went as far away as one could go, i hurt still i try to get back into the god life way but it wont stick. lovely poem i simply adored it bunches.

    vanna
  • I understand, my friend...

    I could relate to a great many aspects of this poem, particularly the last 3 verses...
    Its the not knowing how people will react that's the killer...
    Another deep, dark & perceptive write...
    Well done!!!