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Tolerance Acrostic (Light Sheds Truth)

To live a life of love,
Only living--not judging--
Living a life free of hate and violence,
Every thought, act, word, illuminated by purity,
Resonating across religious and racial lines,
Accentuating the similarities of us children of God,
No judgements made--no torturous tears shed.
Continuous rays of light weaken the opaque walls,
Even in darkness nothing can remain hidden.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    July 15, 2008

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    You have descriped Tolerance so well in this, I long for the days that this becomes our society


    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Mistress Masquerade
    July 7, 2008

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    This is a beautiful description of tolerance in an acrostic poem that does not feel forced, your flow is beautiful and it carries emotion, best of luck.


  • my.stars.dont.shine
    July 6, 2008
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    this is pretty nifty bub.
    good luck in the contest.
    love and miss you.


  • Hope Angel silver member
    July 6, 2008

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    This is beautiful. You described tolerance very well. Good luck in the contest. I love you and miss you.