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Answers behind curtains
veil, tell me your secret
another day, eyes closed
spread my wings
behind scenes
tomorrow's memory
revival

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  • ea silver member
    July 6, 2008

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    Answers veiled - a bid for turthfulness - wistful wish for flight to escape memory and move towards revival. That's my interpretation of this piece.

    I think you need a different word for behind (instead of using it twice in a such a short piece)