As two magnets attracted
As two boats as pretty as Titanic and Pearl Harbour... crashed the two symbols
and made a baby; the symbol of love
the symbol of bond
bond being the most powerful force not just in history, but present and also, the sound of the future
similar to the sound of church bells on the wedding day
Author notes
a wedding poem. let the marriage be happy! sorry - it's over 30 words.. only by a few though.. it was like a tree and i was an environment activist - i couldn't possibly cut it down
A contest entry
- Wedding Wishes by BellaD.
460 points, ended July 7, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thank you so much for your entry. Interesting poem and choice of symbolism...not sure how I feel about the image that the Titanic forms in my mind in regards to the start of a marriage.
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hi BellaD
yeah, sorry about the bad imaging of the shipping.. I were wondering over that.. it was meant to be more of the positive crash symbols.. maybe I should use the word clash instead.. and twist those few lines..
thanks for reading and letting me enter, also for inspiring me to write about this!
Hope your well! xxxxxx
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