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Poetry

Penning feelings, never want to stoP
Over the scroll and the keyboard toO
Expression of who I want to bE 
Tattered corners, my paper is falling aparT
Random subjects within my head, gatheR
Youthful thoughts, passing bY

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Poetry (shadow arcostic)

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  • Mistress Masquerade
    July 7, 2008

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    This is really cool, you've inspired me to try and write a shadow acrostic, this is a clever write and I wish you the best of luck.


  • Poetic Obscenity
    July 7, 2008

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    WONDERFUL! It's simply beautiful. I wish you luck in the contest. Though, i'm sure if they know talent you've got a sure fire finalists placement.
    =]


  • Ally
    July 6, 2008

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    Oh wow this is really clever! And I love it when people write about poetry itself
    The use of acrostics is really good- and original, as it's at the end of the line, rather than the front as one would expect!
    A really good write X


    • peridotPixi
      July 6, 2008
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      your silly, its both, this is a style called a shadow acrostic (some people call them mirror acrosstics) thank you for the comment


      • Ally
        July 6, 2008
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        pfft well. Rather a mirror acrostic than a normal one


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 6, 2008

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    Great.
    I liked this alot.
    Very good Arcostic {i dont think i spelled that right}
    .. shelly


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    I like the way you think poetry is so good when the need to read is evidently. thank you for this entry,
    good luck

    Lin


  • daviscth silver member
    July 6, 2008
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    A wonderful shadow acrostic. I want to try one of these one day. You did a great job sweetie.

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