Image Credit "Sunrise" - PALamppa
October 2006 White Horse Beach, Plymouth MA USA
She discovers awareness
patiently awaiting sunrise;
Venus singing twinkled song,
sparking life's glow.
Within its orange incandescence
she remembers love.
Author notes
mentation: the process of thinking (especially thinking carefully)
http://www.rhymezone.com/r/d?u=mentation
20 words
A contest entry
- Convince Me by ea.
300 points, ended July 6, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Incandescence is such a beautiful word. And beautifully used here. This whole piece is rather poignant, dripping with the imagery of the picture, but bringing a newfound life to it as well. Marvelous work as always!
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Good stuff.
She discovers awareness and remembers love.
Dynamite.
Thanks for this.
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Gorgeous words, and photo to match.
All the best in the contest dear.
Love and peace always,
mj
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this is a great piece for the contest ... you convinced me of the potency of brevity to convey something immeasurable. thanks.
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Very sweet and simple. I like it alot.
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beautiful photo and lovely spiritual quality
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Just beautiful!
Nice photo and nice work with the poem Pamela! Good expression in this one! THANKS!!
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patpowersnotshowpoet
Thank you so much for your kind words. So pleased you enjoyed this one. ~Pamela
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Very zen-like and a gorgeous photo. Thank you.
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Thank you for your kind words and an EXTREMELY challenging contest.
YOU are the BEST! I had such fun with this one in a 'frustrating' kind of way. 
Thanks again. ~Pamela
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